Arline Schceerder's blog =)
To begin with, I visited and read Gabriela’s blog because she is my friend. But in this opportunity I choose her since she didn’t receive comments of their other classmates. In her blog there are only six comments and the same people wrote to her. What is it happening with her others classmates? Maybe she doesn’t finish her homework during the class, and she isn’t only, but eventually she does that.
Her name in blog is Arline Sckreeder because is a book’s character from which her boyfriend is writing. I believe that name isn’t much known. In my case, I like different names especially when names are unusually. Other things I liked was her simple design but nice at the same time. I liked the colors she used in her blogger template designer.
My favorite post was “bad education in Chile” because is my favorite topic. In this topic, I agree with her above all if there are lot teachers who don’t know anything such as subject and general culture. As I mentioned before in my posts, we can change this reality.
On the other hand, maybe she needs to put in her title something more motivating or get attention readers to read her blog. Other thing she can improve her English is to pay attention in her punctuation, especially in commas, for example, after the phrase “in my case, (comma)”. This thing is more clarify to people who read that.
My experience with my blog
At first, I like the idea to have a blog, is the better form to learn to write and read different opinions in the same topic. Maybe I don’t write excellent, but I try to do my best performance.
Each week, I try to do my homework during the class, but the problem is I don’t finish it during the determined time. In my case, I need to organize my ideas to write something coherent. Besides, when I finish doing it I write in different blogs, however and generally, I write some comments to people I know more.
On the other hand, most of activities have connection with Straightforward’s book. Nonetheless, not all of them are interesting to write such as football; well I speak only for myself, but I try to give other sense for that topic.
I would have done in my blog a lot thing such as to end my homework during the class to get comment of other classmate. In addition to do more comments. I mean, my idea was to write all my classmates and know their opinion. However, the time wasn’t enough for me because I had to do others thing such as to study for other subject or to do my homework.
blog blog blog!!!
- miércoles, 30 de junio de 2010
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